Sexual Politics III: Competition?
22 March 2008 at 3:08 pm (Drinks, Fiction..., I write., Love?, Short Short Stories) (Fiction...)
She decided to wait at the bar, instead of the restaurant/food-court. Yes, a bar next to a food-court, this is why she loved Delhi so very much! The bar was cheap, and they let her smoke in peace. The waiters were useless on a busy night, she was used to them taking ages to get her water, or even take her order. But they were sweet. They smiled apologetically when they wanted clarifications on the order, and lit her cigarette quickly.
The bartender was different today, sadly. The usual one made cocktails for her, just as she requested. On her last visit, he had served Mango Margaritas for her friends, and a Caprioshka with Absolut Kurant for her. It had been a crazy night! They had giggled and laughed and asked for complimentary peanuts and guzzled pitcher after pitcher! Finally the girls had wanted a nice cocktail and he had been kind enough to follow instructions. That was the thing with her, she would smile and talk oh-so-sweetly and always get her way! She never ever forgot to thank people. Never. That ensured her getting her way the second, third, or the gazillionth time around. Always. Well, mostly always.
Today, was different. Today, involved waiting, and she hated it. She had taken the wretched Metro and he still hadn’t reached. So, she waited and nursed her JD and Coke. She lit her cigarette on her own and stared at the smoke forming utterly lazy patterns around her. She smiled and sipped her drink. She speed-dial-ed him and cut the call before it could connect. She leaned back into her chair and continued dreaming with the lazy gorgeous smoke. She absently played with her silver earrings, and sometimes even twirled her hair around her index finger. The gray haze in the dimly lit room allowed her a trip to Lala-land. Her world. Her haven. A non-existent yet very essential part of her. She took solace in the quiet caused by the incessant chatter of people who didn’t matter. She planned her week, her days, her hours… the time she would spend at work, with the friends, with him, and with her books. She needed more time with him… She chalked it all out in neat columns despite knowing that it was impossible for her to implement any of her plans except of course the time spent at work. Work. A global firm, full of very serious and ambitious people. A firm with a gorgeous office, and not so gorgeous people. A firm that screamed quality?
“Is that really you?”, he spoke and shattered her reverie. She smiled and sat up, and took another drag. She nodded and presented him with an option to sit down. He jumped on the offer and planted himself firmly in the chair facing her. “So, how have you been?”, he delivered the greeting without really caring for the answer. Like hell, and you? She thought, but she continued with the fake smile that always seemed genuine and said, “Great? You?”
“Good, good. You look so… Wow! It’s been a long time eh?”, his eyes studied her gorgeous face, and the silver chain that caressed her beautiful skin.
Since I hung up on you and asked you to fuck off. Yes, it has, the humiliation of being cheated on has almost subsided, the pain had been drowned that very day with lots of vodka shots. “Yes, loooong time!”, she enunciated, and continued after lighting another cigarette “So, how’s everything? What you doing these days? Work or still studying?”
“I’m working now, with Dad”, he parroted to get it over with.
“Uhuh, nice… want something to drink?”, she helped.
“Sure, I’ll have a pint. I have to catch the 10:15 show.”
She ordered a Kingfisher pint, and another JD for herself. She lit his cigarette, and he mumbled an inaudible ‘thank you’. She leaned back and drank him in. Oh, he was quite hot. Her type, to look at. Clean, trimmed, well groomed, perfect nose and dark eyes. Tall, very tall and tanned. She raised her eyebrows at the diamond studs in his ears and laughed.
“What?”, he asked, his pride at being assessed positively hurt at the sudden although very sexy throaty laughter.
“Diamond studs?!”, she scoffed.
“Am I interrupting?”, a very nice voice asked.
They turned towards the man with the beautiful voice. She jumped up from her seat and hugged his 6′2″ tall frame. He kissed her forehead and tucked her hair behind her ear, he raised his eyebrows ever so slightly at the other occupant of the table and she obliged.
“Rohit, meet Dev.”
The men shook hands and took their seats. The orders were repeated, and Dev asked for a Black Label with Soda. The cigarettes were lit, Dunhills for her, Marlboro Lights for Rohit, and Marlboro Reds for Dev.
“Why this bar? Don’t you like the Whiskey Bar?”, Dev asked her, still unable to come to terms with the Food-court + Bar place.
“I like it. It reminds me of when I was young? Don’t you like it too? Rohit?”
Before Rohit could respond, Dev spoke, “So, how long have you known each other?”
“A long time,” she replied.
“Since first year college,” Rohit replied.
The conversation jumped from one topic to another, it careened dangerously on topics one never discusses after the “fuck off” has been delivered by one of the parties. It would relax, while everyone sipped their drinks, all in all, it was one uncomfortable table. Of course, she was at complete ease, she lazed in the over-sized arm chair like a gorgeous member of the feline species. She took Dev’s hand in her and exclaimed, like she always did, “My hands are tiny!” She also compared her hands with Rohit’s and whispered, “Not bad, they don’t look so small now”. She laughed at a ridiculously funny work story Dev had narrated and pointed out how adorable Rohit’s dimples were. She purred ‘Oh! Darling!”, whenever Dev paid her a compliment. The men were miffed, for very different reasons of course.
The evening wore itself out.
“Nice meeting you, we should catch up again sometime”, Rohit uttered the usual niceties.
“Sure. We will plan something out…”, Dev left it at that. She nodded and picked up her bag.
That night, in his expensive apartment, and even more expensive Egyptian cotton sheets, Dev competed with the memories of Rohit, and pulled out all his tricks. She became very loud. He looked very satisfied and very tired. She walked to the French window, and stood staring at the dark, silent, sleepy city she called her own. She lit a Dunhill, and inhaled. Exhaled. She stood there, posing for him. Smoking. Playing with her silver earrings, and twirling her hair. He turned on his side, stared at her glowing post-coital skin, her gloriously messy hair, and the tattoo on her ankle. He waited for her to finish smoking, only to ask her to light another, from his packet.
She walked towards him, and he knew. She smiled knowingly, and he smiled back. As she opened the packet of Marlboro Reds, she raised her perfectly arched eyebrows. “What is this, Sir?”
“What do you think it is, Ma’am?”
“Keys?”
“Yes, I think you should move in.”
“Really?”
“Yes, really. Now, come back to bed. I want to kiss you.”
“No, not now.”
“Okay, but hurry up. We have to move your stuff in tomorrow. It’s the only day I’m not working for the next two weeks”.
“Okay.”
She walked to the kitchen, and brewed herself some Jasmine tea. As she sipped on it luxuriously, she grinned, very Cheshire Cat like. She visited Lala-land, and planned the changes to the kitchen, the living room, and the guest-bedroom, which will be her study, rather library. She drained the cup and walked back to the bedroom. As she slipped under the covers, she let her hands trail the length and breadth of his chest… he stirred and let her bury her face in his shoulder. She sighed and drifted off to sleep.
Thank you, Rohit, she purred.

MisterCrowley said,
22 March 2008 at 6:52 pm
I think, Syrup, that you’re our answer to M&B ;)
This bar-by-the-restaurant….heh..it sounds like the Drunken Duck to me….especially since ’someone’ has to catch the ‘10.15 show’….at the Plaza, maybe? :)
Don’t mind my dirty, little, conspiracy-theorist, lawyer mind….we are like this wonly
Aaki said,
23 March 2008 at 11:05 am
hee. vanilla, there are openings for writers at mnb india! this just may be it! :) it reminded me of the times i used to love those romance novels. i think i’ll take one mnb out tonight. :P
hugs.
siropdevanille said,
23 March 2008 at 2:20 pm
@MisterCrowley & Aaki: Ouch, that hurt. MBs!? I was aiming for a little under-handed humour. Hmmm…
Anyway, Crowley: Yes, it is the Drunken Duck. Cheap and not shady. Good lawyer-skills (although the hints were very easy to figure out! ;))
Asif said,
23 March 2008 at 2:58 pm
Okay…nice short punctuated workings of the mind…fitting title…competition between the poor blokes (!) or the woman competing with herself…and I thought M&B had women playing the damsel looking for the knight…not those who gave head to play around with their heads…
siropdevanille said,
23 March 2008 at 3:13 pm
@Asif: Hehe… :)
Yes, people still love damsels, but then they aren’t really fun! Right?
MisterCrowley said,
23 March 2008 at 4:29 pm
“Rapunzel, rapunzel. Let your hair down.
Feck off. Get your own mountain climbing gear”
Hehe…
Aaki said,
23 March 2008 at 8:58 pm
mnb is an art, you stupid girl. i meant it as a compliment. :) i will write one mnb for sure before i die. so should you. its therapeutic. le whee!
shubha said,
24 March 2008 at 11:11 am
this was the first of your writing i have read after almost 6-7 years…very enjoyable and intriguing…im not and never have been a fan of mnb though this was fun!!!
chandni said,
24 March 2008 at 6:55 pm
mnb :O no no this was pretty interesting (not that i have not grown up on a steady diet of mb’s). Predictable but interesting. I loved mister crowley’s take on rapunzel :D
chandni said,
24 March 2008 at 9:36 pm
lovely!!!!
I am hooked to this blog :D
and eerily, you seem so much like me ;)
Anonymous said,
24 March 2008 at 10:23 pm
I think it’s really cool.. definitely doesn’t fall in the M&B category (I haven’t ever read one.. but I have been told bout throbbing this and heaving that)..
I like the subtle sarcasm and the inherent humour and yes.. the very ‘real’ sexual politics.. and just the fact that you give it a well defined.. close to home setting.. makes you go ‘aah.. i know that.. and that.. and definitely recognise that.. ooooh that bitch.. probably recognise her too’ .. hehe..
You’re good, time to start that book, i say!!
Schizo said,
25 March 2008 at 11:48 am
so why would R come to meet D? was it a set up or did he know? was it just curiosity? i cant imagine getting my 2 men to meet. fireworks would fly.but before that, i am not sure it would possibly even happen.
thats why i like fiction.its a sea of possibilities. and anything is possible.
and its not like an M&B.whoever compared this to that,hasnt had the heavy dose of mb’s i had in high school. that was then. i believed in the tall dark knight. this is now. now it just makes me laugh.
between R and D, i prefer R. i dont know why. maybe because he seems more real.
its ironical that in fiction we strive to construct real characters. :)
siropdevanille said,
25 March 2008 at 11:51 pm
@MisterCrowley: Haaaaahaahahahahaha!!!!! Or what do they call it – LMAO!
@Aaki: Alrighty then. :)
@shubha: Thank you… I’m glad you took time out to read this and liked it :)
@chandni: Hehe! Thanks… Glad you enjoyed reading it… And when are you putting up a longer post next?? ;)
@chandni2: Thank you sooo much! I am quite loving your blog too :) See blogroll!
@Anonymous: Wow. Thanks! I wish, I wish…
And yes, no throbbing/heaving this/that to be written about! Why the quotes for real? :P
@Schizo: Simple… Its always a set up. She’s gorgeous and catty and has claws :P Hehe…. Hmmm… Dev is real too…. but then it’s a short story, it’s fun to spice it up! hehe!
Oh! the tall dark knights… every little girl read teenager’s dream…. never happens eh?
And yes, very ironic.